Comments on: Meat http://spoil.vianegativa.us/2007/03/29/meat/ selected older poems by Dave Bonta Thu, 12 Mar 2009 02:50:07 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Dave Bonta http://spoil.vianegativa.us/2007/03/29/meat/comment-page-1/#comment-51 Dave Bonta Tue, 08 May 2007 22:02:05 +0000 http://spoil.wordpress.com/2007/03/29/meat/#comment-51 I'm glad, because I admit I did hesitate over the "publish" button for this one. I’m glad, because I admit I did hesitate over the “publish” button for this one.

]]> By: angie http://spoil.vianegativa.us/2007/03/29/meat/comment-page-1/#comment-50 angie Tue, 08 May 2007 21:18:55 +0000 http://spoil.wordpress.com/2007/03/29/meat/#comment-50 heh. Since I both embarrass easily and have a light tolerance for viscera, I flipped right by this one after I read it -- but was drawn back for other reasons. It's surprisingly sensitive beneath its muscular/masculine exterior. I think it's great. heh.

Since I both embarrass easily and have a light tolerance for viscera, I flipped right by this one after I read it — but was drawn back for other reasons. It’s surprisingly sensitive beneath its muscular/masculine exterior. I think it’s great.

]]> By: Dave Bonta http://spoil.vianegativa.us/2007/03/29/meat/comment-page-1/#comment-49 Dave Bonta Tue, 08 May 2007 20:44:41 +0000 http://spoil.wordpress.com/2007/03/29/meat/#comment-49 Thanks. This isn't autobiographical, FWIW. Thanks. This isn’t autobiographical, FWIW.

]]> By: angie http://spoil.vianegativa.us/2007/03/29/meat/comment-page-1/#comment-48 angie Tue, 08 May 2007 20:42:47 +0000 http://spoil.wordpress.com/2007/03/29/meat/#comment-48 Interesting. Vulnerable. I love this line: "My shadow faded as the clear sky went white." Interesting. Vulnerable. I love this line: “My shadow faded as the clear sky went white.”

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