Comments on: Spoil

By: Peter

Peter — Sat, 28 Apr 2007 13:51:17 +0000

I remember this from Via Negativa. Just as much fun reading it here. It moves just like childhood.

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Fri, 23 Mar 2007 16:05:38 +0000

Thanks for the sympathetic analysis. I appreciate it.

By: endlesslyredonoursnow

endlesslyredonoursnow — Fri, 23 Mar 2007 00:14:37 +0000

Great language, great energy. Quite filmic in a way, reminds me of those rite of passage movies. I like the way imagination and reality intersect and depart from one another, how you see the real inner story happening beneath the events.

Good work man.

By: Dave Bonta

Dave Bonta — Tue, 13 Mar 2007 02:36:15 +0000

Thanks.

By: twitches

twitches — Mon, 12 Mar 2007 17:44:07 +0000

Wow. So many surprising turns here. Very well done.